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Character Profile: Alfon Hawken


Mar 30 2005, 02:39 AM (Post #1)
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Full Character Name: Alfon Hawken

Character Nicknames: He is called Hawk or Captain (Or Captain Hawk! stongue.gif ) by his crewmen and women. His firstmate, Wyn Colfur, calls him Hawk most of the time, but also refers to him as Alfon.

Age / Date of Birth: 37 / September 24, 213 S.A. (Second Age)

Class / Job: Rover / Captain of the Obsidian

Gender: Male

Relatives: His mother and father, Fara and Pterian Hawken, died when he turned 30, because of a disease that they contracted. They died in his hometown of

Height / Weight: 6'3" / 253

Other Physical Attributes / Appearance: Alfon Hawken is a rather muscular man, his frame squat and heavy. He has brown hair that is usually covered by a crimson bandana. Standing about 6'3", and weighing in at about 253lbs, he is heavily built and very powerful. His skin is sun-darkened and creased by many years at the sea and in the air. Startling blue eyes contrasts heavily the enormous amount of bright red Hawk wears.

Mental Attributes / Personality: Bousterous and loud, he is an electric man with a lot of energy. Though he is often silly and playful, becoming a solemn-eyed brick wall is not a large accomplishment for this seasoned airship pilot. At his worst, he is scary and intemidating. On a lighter note, Hawken is very friendly and will not do anything to harm someone deliberately without reason. His attidute toward slackers is harsh and condesending; he views the lazy as "incompetent and useless".

Background / History: Alfon Hawken was born in the very thing he would come to love and respect: and airship. His 9 month pregnant mother, Fara Hawken and his father, Pterian Hawken were touring the brand new invention: the "Flying Ship" or "airship" when Hawk's time inside of his mother was over. Fara was taken to one of the cabins, and she gave birth to Alfon Don Hawken on the twenty-fourth of September, 213 S.A. From the day Hawk could walk, he had a love for airships. His love for the marvelous invention grew and grew as time went by. At the age of fifteen, he got his first taste of the sky—as a cabin boy under his father. When Hawk was 18, he got to take command of his fther's ship, the Deadly Horizon. Everyone aboard called him Hawk, and that is where his nickname came from. At the age of 25, the abitious, young, talented youth ordered for his own ship to be built. At its completion, he named it the Obsidian. Ever sinse the completion of his baby, he has traveled around the land of Farrowyn; he had taken on many dubious occupation, a mercenary, a bounty hunter, and some not so dubious one, a trader, a pilot for hire. Now, at the age of 37, he has still not decided what to do with his life. As he searches for his calling, others seek to bar him from becoming what he was meant to be.

Equipment / Clothing: Hawk carries a single longsword and several throwing knives. He wears a worn iron breastplate and leather gloves and boots. A dark red cape flows the back of his armor. His casual clothing usually consists of a crimson tunic and pants, colorful scarves and sashes (A Rover trademark), and a red bandana.

Other Information: Hawk has a strange weakness for soft music. If he hears something melodic and cheery, he will be inclined to dance. He will often dance with his crew members; they have gotten used to it and usually just play along. An accomplishment that Hawk is very proud of is that he, in all his years of sailing, has never lost a crewman or woman to anything—be it a storm, a dogfight with another airship, or by any sort of accident.

This post has been edited by Iataru: Mar 30 2005, 02:50 AM
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Mar 30 2005, 03:41 AM (Post #2)
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Sum Total: 98 / 100

Way better than last time
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Mar 30 2005, 03:50 AM (Post #3)
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Damn! Stupid and... *grumble* Oh well, as long as I can RP! >.<
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Mar 30 2005, 04:08 AM (Post #4)
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Great. You could RP anyways, since, according to what I know, you didn't intend to join in on large public stories
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Mar 30 2005, 01:59 PM (Post #5)
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Well, at one point I thought about it but now I don't care. stongue.gif I might join later.
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Mar 30 2005, 06:15 PM (Post #6)
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Join later, meaning when it's actually active, right? lol
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