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Character Profile: Har the Navigator (Li Qian Xia)


Jan 24 2006, 02:42 AM (Post #1)
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Full Character Name: Har the Navigator (Li Qian Xia)
Character Nickname: Har; sometimes said with an intentional exlamation point for more feeling.
Age / Date of Birth: 24/ December 18th
Class / Job: Har works three jobs, all on the ship the PCS Pirateer, part of the fleet headed by Comandeer Pirate of Arabia. Mainly, he is a navigator of his ship and knows the seas well. When the days are cool and there is no wind and nowhere to navigate, Har retires into his bar right on the ship, where he serves PoA rum. Furthermore, he serves as the cook, knowing many recipes and being able to cook many different dishes from various nations.
Gender: Male
Relatives: Har was born into a pirate family in China. He soon moved however, as the Japanese invaded and his entire family was killed in a pre-dawn raid (His mother, father, 2 brothers and sister were all killed). He moved in with his uncle not too much later and they decided to go to Arabia, where they found Comandeer Pirate of Arabia. His uncle, now age 55, serves as a lookout assistant to Har when he is navigating his ships.
Height / Weight: 5'7" 145lbs
Other Physical Attributes / Appearances: Har has a keen sense of direction as well as cooking. He can smell a good dish from a mile away and can differentiate between what is good food and bad food just from a little taste. Because he loves food so much, Har has grown much fatter. He is no longer the skinny person he was as a high schooler in Medina back in the day. Har has brown eyes and has prefect vision. He has never taken an eye test however, but he can tell you that he can read the headlines of a newspaper from over a half mile away.

Mental Attributes / Personality: Har is well versed in many different aspects of humanities. He loves to read history and study mathematical proofs and look at scientific discoveries. Navigating has become his first love and he is usually the first off the ship when it lands, no matter where. Debate with Har and you will surely lose, as he has a cache of quotes said by many men in the past. His favorite: George Sayatana's "Those who do not study the past, are doomed to repeat it". Alas, those who fight Har, have not studied the past for they do not know him well.

As for his personality, Har's mood is best looked as an optimist. Even on the darkest of days and worst of battles, Har's mood never becomes pessimistc. He believes that there is always a chance, and nothing is for certain. As any navigator, Har looks for a good adventure—this can both be seen on his bookshelf and his telescope collection, both which he uses to look far into the distance for potential enemies, quote and read literature, or just glance into the stars.

Background / History: Har was born into a family of 5, he being the youngest. At age 7, his hometown of Xiazhou was raided by ravenous Japanese invaders. His father, a manager at a local business, fought to try to save his family but was killed instantly by the overpowering Japanese. The Japanese, seeing that his family was still alive, decided to kill everyone. However, they missed Har as he was hiding in a cupboard, nowhere to be seen. When he came out of his hiding, he saw that everyone has been slaughtered.

As a result of this, Har lived for 3 days on foods he could find around the house. His uncle, who had heard about the incident, came over to see the survivors and found only Har, and decided to take him. From then, they sailed to Arabia, where they settled in Medina, being the only Chinese. They were welcome by most, but shunned by others.

When Har was 19 and entering the last year of formal schooling, Commandeer Pirate of Arabia showed up one day at the doorstep, looking for potential pirates to help him sail the seven seas. After much deliberation with his uncle, Har decided to go—taking his uncle with him. They have served on the same ship ever since.

Equipment / Clothing: Har's favorite color is blue, as it represents the horizon, a symbol of freedom for him. He wears a blue head scarf and carries a sword in his right front pocket, easily accessible. Upon meeting Har, you wouldn't notice that he is a pirate. He wears a simple leather jacket and faded blue jeans, both left over from his days as a civilized man. In his leather jacket pockets you won't find much. A compass resides in the left breast pocket and a pocket knife in his jacket pocket. However, if you do decide to confront him, he holds in his jean pocket a vile of poison, something he created in his bar on his free time. On other occasions, he will use beer bottles to fight.

Other Information: Har the Navigator is a believer in peace and unless confronted or faced with a pirate battle, he will not attack. He is a frim negotiator and believes that words speak louder than actions.

This post has been edited by alblurt06: Feb 3 2006, 02:17 AM
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Jan 24 2006, 05:58 AM (Post #2)
Not Odd anymore
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Holistic Grades:
Length: (10 / 10+ points)
English Syntax: (4 / 5+ points)
Creativity: (5 / 5+ points)
Total / Final Grade: (90 / 100+ points)

Profile Content:
Full Character Name (s): (1 / 3 Points)
Character Nickname (s): (2 / 2 Points)
Age / Date of Birth [If Known]: (3 / 3 Points)
Class / Job: (3 / 3 Points)
Gender: (2 / 2 Points)
Relatives: (5 / 5 Points)
Height / Weight: (2 / 2 Points)
Other Physical Qualities / Appearances: (13 / 15 Points)
Mental Qualities / Personality: (14 / 15 Points)
Background / History: (17 / 20 Points)
Equipment / Clothing: (9 / 10 Points)
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Jan 24 2006, 02:50 PM (Post #3)
Masked Insanity
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Holistic Grades:
Length: 10/10 points
English Syntax: 5/5 points
Creativity: 5/5 points

Profile Content:
Full Character Name (s): 2/3 Points
Character Nickname (s): 2/2 Points
Age / Date of Birth [If Known]: 3/3 Points
Class / Job: 3/3 Points
Gender: 2/2 Points
Relatives: 5/5 Points
Height / Weight: 2/2 Points
Other Physical Qualities / Appearances: 13/15 Points
Mental Qualities / Personality: 15/15 Points
Background / History: 16/20 Points
Equipment / Clothing: 8/10 Points
Other Information: +0/0

Total / Final Grade: 91/100 points
-Weeee....o_o
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Jan 24 2006, 10:14 PM (Post #4)
Democrats won 2006! YES!
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I like Har, but I need to point out one thing-I'm a Commodore, not a Commandeer.
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Jan 24 2006, 11:30 PM (Post #5)
Here for the cute boys ;)
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I appreciate your grading, Haven and Grand.

Can I have reasons why I got the grade I did so I can improve for next time, should there be one?
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Jan 25 2006, 06:58 AM (Post #6)
Not Odd anymore
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Posts: 45,875
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Holistic Grades:
Length: (10 / 10+ points)
English Syntax: (4 / 5+ points) - I think it's obvious. The grammar isn't consistently perfect stongue.gif
Creativity: (5 / 5+ points)
Total / Final Grade: (90 / 100+ points)

Profile Content:
Full Character Name (s): (1 / 3 Points) - FULL NAME! I don't put my name as "Jinghao the math nerd." My full name is "Jinghao Yan"
Character Nickname (s): (2 / 2 Points)
Age / Date of Birth [If Known]: (3 / 3 Points)
Class / Job: (3 / 3 Points)
Gender: (2 / 2 Points)
Relatives: (5 / 5 Points)
Height / Weight: (2 / 2 Points)
Other Physical Qualities / Appearances: (13 / 15 Points) - It doesn't seem complete enough. So what if he can smell well? So what if his vision is good? Isn't there more information?
Mental Qualities / Personality: (14 / 15 Points) - It still is slightly incomplete, but significantly better. I just had to take off a point stongue.gif
Background / History: (17 / 20 Points) - Again, seems incomplete. Maybe a little more details?
Equipment / Clothing: (9 / 10 Points) - o_o I really don't give a damn his favorite color is blue. It should've been stated elsewhere, or explained in a simple cause-and-effect form in relation to his clothing being blue. And other minor stuff like this; it's either unnecessary, or missing. I should've given this a 8 but I figured I'd give you 90% stongue.gif
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QUOTE (alblurt06 @ Jan 24 2006, 03:30 PM)
I appreciate your grading, Haven and Grand.

Can I have reasons why I got the grade I did so I can improve for next time, should there be one?
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Jan 26 2006, 01:01 AM (Post #7)
Here for the cute boys ;)
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QUOTE (GRAND @ Jan 24 2006, 11:58 PM)
Full Character Name (s): (1 / 3 Points) - FULL NAME! I don't put my name as "Jinghao the math nerd." My full name is "Jinghao Yan"

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My guy's full name is Har the Navigator though. Clarify? Please?
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Jan 26 2006, 05:27 AM (Post #8)
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What do you mean clarify? It doesn't qualify as a full name.
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Jan 26 2006, 05:39 AM (Post #9)
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What is a full name then?

And when do I get the RP license?
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Jan 26 2006, 07:09 PM (Post #10)
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I'll send it to you this afternoon. My reasons are basically the same as his, without the frustrating remarks.
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Jan 27 2006, 02:58 AM (Post #11)
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I already sent it.
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Feb 1 2006, 06:09 PM (Post #12)
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To put it simply, you need an actual surname. Find me someone with navigator as their surname, and I'll give you 10,000 Zeny.
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Feb 2 2006, 12:59 AM (Post #13)
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And Henry the Navigator doesn't count.
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Feb 2 2006, 01:05 AM (Post #14)
Here for the cute boys ;)
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Oh, gotcha. I rest my case then.

Do I need to change my name then for a re-grade or is it unecessary?
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Feb 2 2006, 05:38 AM (Post #15)
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You could change it, and hope whoever graded your profile to change their scores, but they don't exactly have to- and you won't be forced to either original.gif
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