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Dec 8 2004, 04:57 AM (Post #1)
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DONE!!

Full Character Name: Momori Zaushi

Character Nicknames: LB, Lightning Flash, Speed Demon

Date of Birth: July 1st, 1987

Class /Job: Bodyguard/Assassin

Gender: Male

Relatives: (not revealed to protect them) Father - x Mother - x Sister - x Sister -x Brother - x

Height: 6'1"

Weight:
131 lbs

Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair, and has extremely well developed leg and arm muscles. He wears pants and a half hand shirt. He has an extremely large and heavy blade on his back (about 9 feet long, 2 feet wide, 7 inches thick, and about 120 lbs) which he can swing around with ease. His face has one scar by the side. His fists are bruised and scarred all over and his calf's and knees are full of cuts.

Background: Zaushi was born to a successful family of traders in a small village. As a young kid he used to travel with his parents when they went to sell goods at the big cities and villages. One day in a city he came across a combat school. The building intruded him so he sneaked into it and what he saw would effect him forever. There were many kids and adults there training and fighting, learning how to become a high rank warrior. From that moment he made up his mind to become the greatest warrior that ever lived. That was his dream and he would work at it forever. He knew, however, that he would never be accepted into combat school but didn't give up. He didn't have any exceptional physical skills and his control over magic was below average. But he worked his ass off everyday and began to increase in strength and speed.

Finally at the age of 11 he was recognized by others in his village and urged to go to the village to become a warrior. His parents gave him some money and told him to go if he wanted. Soon after he left for the city and joined the combat school there. However he was still one of the weakest people there since he still had poor control over magic. After seeing how good the other fighters were, he doubled his training and worker harder than anyone there. Everyday he would get up and just try and improve. Eventually at the age of 13 he was recommended as a skilled rookie and that he should be moved up to a low class warrior. However he was denied the promotion since his control over magic was too poor.

Zaushi was clearly stronger than any other rookie but he would not be allowed to become an official low class warrior till he could improve his magic skills. He worked hard and tried everyday but he could only improve them a bit. At the age of 14 he tried again to become a low class warrior but was failed again. He tried hard everyday and eventually at the age of 15 became a low class warrior. However he received a letter the next day after his promotion that if he didn't improve his control over magic in the next month he would be kicked out of combat school. He practiced everyday but couldn't do it in one month and was kicked out.

He then wandered around and 2 weeks later he met Grand (=/). Grand said he could make him the greatest warrior ever and he eagerly joined Grand. At the age of 16 his skills improved even more and he became the right hand of Grand and was ranked as an Elite warrior. He still pursues his dream to become the greatest warrior that ever lived and would do anything for that dream. Since he joined Grand, he has attacked many enemies but has never brought himself to killing one enemy. He is the ultimate warrior, he never loses in speed or strength. Even though his control over magic is still extremely weak, his physical skills are unbeatable. He easily dodges every physical and magic attack thrown at him with his speed and can appear right behind enemies in an instant. He wields a blade that is 120 lbs, 9 ft long, 2 ft wide, and 7 inches thick with ease. He has perfected many fighting styles and has never been beaten by anyone in a fight.

Personality: Zaushi is very naieve and his dream to be the best often makes him act the way he does. He trusts everyone even if everyone else around him doesn't. He is always positive and never thinks negative. He values life and how great it is instead of regretting the actions he makes. Because of this he can never bring him to kill someone but still injures some pretty badly (but not too much). He can also easily be tricked since he is so trusting. Basically he is like a little kid and doesn't really think too much about what will happen but does it just for his dream.

Equipment / Clothing
: He wears pants and a half hand shirt most of the time (unless its freezing). He carries a huge blade which hangs across his back and 2 short daggers on his left leg. His shoes are made so they are extremely light and can endure the speed he moves at without taking too much damage by pushing more force through the ground.

Other Info: Uhhh if you have a sad story or tell him that you want to be the best then he will help you out even if you are his enemy.

This post has been edited by Legendary Bladesman: Mar 29 2005, 06:14 AM
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Dec 9 2004, 04:03 AM (Post #2)
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Just in case you were thinking it, RP Licenses won't be passed out for a little while longer. Use that time to improve your bio. An 127 pound, 6'1" man? He must be pretty skinny.
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Dec 10 2004, 12:59 AM (Post #3)
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Yah no duh. Its cuz he's a runner! Some professional runners are around that so thats why I picked it.
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Dec 15 2004, 12:54 AM (Post #4)
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Runners usually have a lot of leg muscles.
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Dec 18 2004, 11:03 PM (Post #5)
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>_<, why does he have scars on his calves? Has he been having sex with knives? O_o

Oh, and that height/weight thing is way off for someone who is supposed to be able to swing a 110 pound sword around and actually be effective with it.

Right now, your profile won't pass the criteria test for anything...
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Dec 19 2004, 02:49 AM (Post #6)
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A 110 Pound Sword? That changes everything. Unless he swings it around with Telekinetics, he has no chance with that. Some characters can move around at the sound of speed in my database and they weigh 187 pounds! But if you wanna carry a 110 pound sword, you must be really slow or weigh like...300-400 pounds, right?
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Mar 14 2005, 02:18 AM (Post #7)
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lol I based that on Zabuza from naruto. Also scars on calves are quite common for people who exercise a lot. Lastly if someone can swing a sword with Telekinetics according to you, then they can swing a sword almost as heavy as them. They are both crazy but the point of these characters are to be have realistic and imaginary ideas combined. Also only sprinters have strong muscles =/. Otherwise most runners dont have that strong muscles, just above average.
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Mar 14 2005, 03:35 AM (Post #8)
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Don't make me go all scientific about this... <_<
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Mar 14 2005, 03:59 AM (Post #9)
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Telekinetics is a complicated art <_< You can't lift a 5 ton object right when you learn it, it's like learning how to actually lift stuff up but easier- considering your only limited by mind and not physical muscles that have to grow and have limits.
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Mar 14 2005, 04:16 AM (Post #10)
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And it's fantasy!
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Mar 15 2005, 01:56 AM (Post #11)
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QUOTE (GRAND @ Mar 13 2005, 07:34 PM)
Don't make me go all scientific about this... <_<
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meaning?

QUOTE (Wolfwood @ Mar 13 2005, 07:58 PM)
Telekinetics is a complicated art <_< You can't lift a 5 ton object right when you learn it, it's like learning how to actually lift stuff up but easier- considering your only limited by mind and not physical muscles that have to grow and have limits.
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lol uhh your muscles dont have limits either, they just improve slower and slower. After a while sure it might not seem like you're improving but you constantly are. Also Telekinetics is a bunch of bs so if you can count that kinda bs, then you can count someone lifting their weight with ease.

QUOTE (GRAND @ Mar 13 2005, 08:15 PM)
And it's fantasy!
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Exactly.
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Mar 15 2005, 02:15 AM (Post #12)
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Which is my point exactly. I just find it pure bulls*it that your character can lift a blade that heavy without using any type of magic/techniques. The way I see it, this bio will never be graded a passing score unless something is backing that up.
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Mar 15 2005, 04:26 AM (Post #13)
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It's possible, if you get your center of gravity just right sbiggrin.gif
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Mar 15 2005, 10:20 PM (Post #14)
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Yeah. That's for lifting it up. Not swinging the 110-pound sword into an enemy and actually doing damage. You could say that he uses telekinetics through his arm which increases his strength some so he can actually use the blade.
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Mar 15 2005, 11:44 PM (Post #15)
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Increasing his strength won't do much, considering it would cause him to be unbalanced so bad, with his low weight, that he'll just fall.

Think about it, any object with any momentum produces outward forces... It's called the centrifugal force
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