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Character Profile: Iataru Hadagashi, (Revamped for "Origin Manga")


Jan 3 2005, 02:02 AM (Post #1)
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Full Character Name: Iataru Kousa Hadagashi
Character Nickname: Kaki Kakeashi (駆け足火気)
Age / Date of Birth: 21/September 24 (year unknown)
Class / Job: Ronin/Spy
Gender: Male
Relatives: Jingen Hadagashi (brother/#1 rival), Shinbii Fuwa (sister/emotional support), father (Saigoun Hadagashi) and mother (Retsu Hadagashi) are both deceased
Height / Weight: 6'2"/140 lbs
Other Physical Attributes: Long black hair tied back in a loose chonmage; Piercing emerald eyes; Tan skin with multiple battle scars; Has a black tattoo on his left palm with the symbol of his cursed family (罰); Scars on his left leg that resemble and upside-down cross
Mental Attributes / Personality: Iataru is rough on the outside, which goes back to his childhood; Inside he is a kind and sensitive person and the only people that bring it out in him are Itaki and Sora; Iataru fights for his honor, so naturally he is aggressive when it is challenged; He is level-headed and a tactical genius but can be silly when around friends; His attitude toward his friends is kind and polite, but to his enemies, it's cocky and merciless; He is technically sane but his enemies can't ever tell
Background / History: Iataru was born into a house of nobility, bred to be a servant of the Emperor, a great Bushi Daimyou of Toukyo. Iataru led a great life, if it weren't for his no-good brother Jingen. He and his brother fought small skirmishes all through their childhood, and almost always Iataru was humiliated by his crooked brother. He finaly defeated him one day after an entire year of training in the mountains, honing his skills, but by then Jingen was already Daimyou of Toukyo. Now that he had defeated the Daimyou, he either had to slay him and take the seat, or to leave the prefecture. He wanted nothing to do with royalty, so he left the city, ashamed and void of his honor. Iataru wanders for about a year, crosses the ocean, and finds the large city of Orinal. He meets up with an old friend, Strife. Strife introduces him to Haven, and they convince him to become a spy for the new resistance against the Imperialists. He then meets Itaki Watanabe and Sora Inutaisho, who befriend him; he finaly finds a place to base his operations as Haven's insider. Itaki later finds out his reason for being there and reveals herself as being and insider as well. Iataru had made some great allies in his ventures, but he wondered how long he could keep allies so easily earned.
Equipment / Clothing: Carries an iron katana and a steel koshigatana; Wears a dark green kimono with a black sash; Wears zouri etched with the kanji, 駆け足火気 (Kaki Kakeashi), meaning "Running Fire" on the bottom; Wears a necklace with a jade "Dragon's Tooth" on it, sealing the curse upon him, and only him, when it is broken, the curse can spread to other humans (only humans)
Other Information: Has a small amount of magic merged with his body, protecting him from a sertain number of fatal injuries; His mother and father were slain by Oniroshi, a demon the wears the head of its victims on spikes on its back. Iataru slays the beast and carries its head in a box on his travels; Iataru got his nickname from his un-natural speed and his resistance to fire at such speeds as 45 mph on foot

This post has been edited by Haven: Jan 3 2005, 03:29 AM
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Jan 3 2005, 03:19 AM (Post #2)
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Topic Title: 5/5 Points
Length: 8/10 Points
Grammar / Spelling: 6/6 Points
Neatness / Creativity: 5/6 points

Full Character Name: 4/4 Points
Character Nickname: 3/4 Points
Age / Date of Birth: 4/4 Points
Class / Job: 4/4 Points
Gender: 2/2 Points
Relatives: 4/4 Points
Height / Weight: 2/2 Points
Other Physical Attributes / Appearances: 9/10 Points
Mental Attributes / Personality: 10/10 Points
Background / History: 9/12 Points
Equipment / Clothing: 10/10 Points
Other Information: 7/8 Points

My Grade: 92/100
-Made me mad with the connection to the Manga, but otherwise good enough to pass.
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Feb 3 2005, 09:22 PM (Post #3)
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As much as I regret to post this...

Topic Title: 5/5
Topic Description: N/A
Length: +4 Points
Grammar: +3 Points
Neatness/Creativity: +3 Points

Name: +4 Points
Nickname: +3 Points
Age: +4 Points
Class/Job: +4 Points
Gender: +2 Points
Relatives: +4 Points (It's nice to see somebody who doesn't have a dead family)
Height/Weight: +2 Points
Other Physical Attributes/Appearance: +8 Points
Mental Attributes/Personality: +8 Points
Background/History: +8 Points
Equipment/Clothing: +8 Points
Other Info: +5 Points

TOTAL: 70/100

The passing score is 80. You have failed my grading- and I gave you a higher score then you deserved really. Your original was 65...
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Feb 3 2005, 11:52 PM (Post #4)
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lmao, I don't think he's active anymore, so I don't think it matters.

And wolf, I'm not sure but I may have raised the low bar to 85.
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Feb 4 2005, 03:25 AM (Post #5)
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Well it doesn't matter. He/She didn't pass anyways.
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Feb 4 2005, 04:47 AM (Post #6)
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I know. I'm just reminding you of something.
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Feb 4 2005, 08:50 PM (Post #7)
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Well, with the average of our grades, he ALMOST passed....and the only reason he isn't on is because his dsl is down, and has been for nearly two weeks. : /

Plus, he already has another bio up thats better than this one.
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Feb 4 2005, 09:22 PM (Post #8)
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Then that one should be considered, not this one. stongue.gif
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Feb 4 2005, 11:48 PM (Post #9)
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We're not looking for average, Haven. If it gets even one un-passing grade, he does not pass.

But I THINK I mentioned there somewhere that we will need the 3rd grader if the difference between the first and second is too great.
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Feb 6 2005, 06:15 AM (Post #10)
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It's not too great. Great is like somebody giving it a 90 and then somebody else giving in a 50. That is a great difference.
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Feb 7 2005, 01:21 AM (Post #11)
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But it's part of the manga....
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